That’s a neat enough story and I really like the worldbuilding… I just wish there was more of it. Even at a volume, there’s a lot of space to explore.
Individual issues (potential spoilers):
Sand: Part 1
Sand: Part 2
A cheerful world.
Bird in the Hand
I love weird alien worlds and weirder biology.
He ate… his children. Ooooy.
I Will Always Hate You: Part 1
Ah! The frame story makes more sense now!
Walking naked down the street twice in a relatively short span. Starting to think he might enjoy it.
The Skeeds are a neat if terrifying bit of world building.
Oh my.
I Will Always Hate You: Part 2
Twist!
O.o